@1186951105 Okay, harsh truth. I struggle with tenses. I used to do present tense, but I've had a few people say that past tense is better. I took that criticism in so that's probably why is it's all over the place now. I'll work harder to resolve that. Also, the italics are the main characters thoughts and how he views the world. I'll look into a better way of implementing it. Thank you for reading, and thank you so much for the critique! I will work harder to improve! Have a good one!